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When we enter the supermarket, I notice Mandy new products. There are Nice toys, delicious Food, sweet drinks, beautiful clothes, trendy shoes for girls and boys and tasty sweet​

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When we enter the supermarket, I notice Mandy new products. There are Nice toys, delicious Food, sweet drinks, beautiful clothes, trendy shoes for girls and boys and tasty sweet